YOU SAID:
that sentence is grammatically correct, but it's wordy and hard to read
INTO JAPANESE
その文は文法的に正しいですが、言葉が多くて読みにくいです
BACK INTO ENGLISH
The sentence is grammatically correct, but it has many words and is difficult to read
INTO JAPANESE
文は文法的に正しいですが、単語が多くて読みにくいです
BACK INTO ENGLISH
The sentence is grammatically correct, but it has many words and is difficult to read
That didn't even make that much sense in English.