YOU SAID:

take my hand will you share this with me

INTO JAPANESE

私の手を取ってこれを私と共有しますか？

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Do you take my hand and share this with me?

INTO JAPANESE

あなたは私の手を取ってこれを私と共有していますか？

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Do you take my hand and share this with me?