YOU SAID:
Stood round me with their dismal shade;
INTO JAPANESE
彼らの嫌な色合いで私の周りに立っていた。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
They stood around me in their disgusting shades.
INTO JAPANESE
彼らは嫌な色合いで私の周りに立っていました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
They stood around me in a disgusting shade.
INTO JAPANESE
彼らは嫌な日陰で私の周りに立っていました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
They stood around me in a disgusting shade.
Come on, you can do better than that.