YOU SAID:
stclair is going to pick up the rank of corporal and doesn't deserve it
INTO JAPANESE
セントクレアは伍長の階級を上げようとしているが、それにふさわしくない
BACK INTO ENGLISH
St. Clair wants to move up the rank of corporal, but he doesn't deserve it
INTO JAPANESE
セントクレアは伍長の階級を上げたいと思っていますが、それに値するものではありません
BACK INTO ENGLISH
St. Clair wants to move up the rank of corporal, but he doesn't deserve it
That didn't even make that much sense in English.