YOU SAID:
So Tsubakura was excited when they woke up and found Yabusame still asleep.
INTO JAPANESE
そこで、ツバクラは目を覚ますと興奮し、ヤブサメがまだ眠っているのを見つけました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
So the swallow was excited when he woke up and found the yab shark still asleep.
INTO JAPANESE
だから、ツバメは彼が目を覚まし、ヤブサメがまだ眠っているのを見つけたとき興奮していました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
So the swallow was excited when he woke up and found the yab shark still asleep.
Come on, you can do better than that.