YOU SAID:
she was tall and beautiful with eyes like burning coals
INTO JAPANESE
彼女は背が高くて美しく、燃える炭のような目をしていた
BACK INTO ENGLISH
She was tall and beautiful with eyes like hot coals
INTO JAPANESE
彼女は背が高くて美しく、目は熱い炭のようだった
BACK INTO ENGLISH
She was tall and beautiful, with eyes like hot coals.
INTO JAPANESE
彼女は背が高くて美しく、その目は熱い炭のようだった。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
She was tall and beautiful, with eyes like hot coals.
That didn't even make that much sense in English.