YOU SAID:

She was so quiet, so withdrawn at first.

INTO JAPANESE

彼女はとても静かだったので、最初は撤回した。

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She was so quiet that she first withdrew.

INTO JAPANESE

彼女はとても静かだったので最初に撤退した。

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She quietly left so I withdrew for the first time.

INTO JAPANESE

彼女は静かに去ったので、私は初めて撤退した。

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She quietly left, so I withdrew for the first time.

INTO JAPANESE

彼女は静かに去ったので、私は初めて撤退した。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

She quietly left, so I withdrew for the first time.