YOU SAID:
she was a very beautiful girl with locks of auburn hair and piercing emerald eyes.
INTO JAPANESE
彼女は非常に美しい女の子でした。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
She was a very beautiful girl.
INTO JAPANESE
彼女はとても美しい女の子でした。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
She was a very beautiful girl.
Come on, you can do better than that.