YOU SAID:
She take my money, when I’m innn need
INTO JAPANESE
彼女は私が必要なときに、私のお金を取る
BACK INTO ENGLISH
She takes my money when I need it
INTO JAPANESE
彼女は私がそれを必要とするときに私のお金をとります
BACK INTO ENGLISH
She takes my money when I need it
Come on, you can do better than that.