YOU SAID:
She rewrote her whole submission essay line by line, and clause by clause.
INTO JAPANESE
彼女は提出論文全体を1行ずつ、そして1文ずつ書き直す。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
She rewrote the entire submission paper line by line and then one sentence.
INTO JAPANESE
彼女は投稿用紙全体を1行ずつ書き直し、次に1文ずつ書き直しました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
She rewrote the entire submission form line by line, then rewrote one sentence at a time.
INTO JAPANESE
投稿フォーム全体を1行ずつ書き直してから、一度に1文ずつ書き直しました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I rewrote the entire submission form one line at a time, and I rewrote it one sentence at a time.
INTO JAPANESE
私は一度に1行ずつ投稿フォーム全体を書き直し、そして一度に1文ずつ書き直しました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I rewrote the entire submission form one line at a time and rewrote one sentence at a time.
INTO JAPANESE
私は一度に1行ずつ提出フォーム全体を書き直し、そして一度に1文を書き直しました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I rewrote the entire submission form one line at a time and rewrote one sentence at a time.
You should move to Japan!