YOU SAID:
She'd never tell Secretly she wanted him as well
INTO JAPANESE
彼女は密かに彼女にも彼が欲しいと言ったことはありませんでした
BACK INTO ENGLISH
She never secretly told her she wanted him
INTO JAPANESE
彼女は密かに彼女に彼が欲しいと言ったことはない
BACK INTO ENGLISH
She never secretly told her she wanted him
Come on, you can do better than that.