YOU SAID:
she longed for the day a prince would come and save her
INTO JAPANESE
彼女は王子が来て彼女を救う日を待ち望んでいた
BACK INTO ENGLISH
She was waiting for the day when the prince came and saved her
INTO JAPANESE
彼女は王子が来て彼女を救った日を待っていました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
She was waiting for the day the prince came and saved her
INTO JAPANESE
彼女は王子が来て彼女を救った日を待っていました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
She was waiting for the day the prince came and saved her
Come on, you can do better than that.