YOU SAID:

She immediately spit out her coffee in surprise and marched across the room to slap him.

INTO JAPANESE

彼女はすぐに驚いてコーヒーを吐き出し、部屋を横切って行進し、彼を平手打ちした.

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Immediately startled, she spat out her coffee, marched across the room, and slapped him.

INTO JAPANESE

すぐに驚いて、彼女はコーヒーを吐き出し、部屋を横切って行進し、彼を平手打ちした.

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Immediately startled, she spat out her coffee, marched across the room, and slapped him.