YOU SAID:
She had turned her head and was looking out of the window on the rose-bushes, which seemed to have in them the summers of all the years when Will would be away.
INTO JAPANESE
彼女は頭を向け、バラの茂みの窓の外を見ていました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
She turned her head and looked out the window of the rose bushes.
INTO JAPANESE
彼女は頭を回してバラの茂みの窓の外を見た。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
She turned her head and looked out the window of the rose bush.
INTO JAPANESE
彼女は頭を回してバラの茂みの窓の外を見た。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
She turned her head and looked out the window of the rose bush.
Come on, you can do better than that.