YOU SAID:
She borrowed the book from him many years ago and hasn't yet returned it.
INTO JAPANESE
彼女は何年も前に彼から本を借りてきて、それをまだ返さなかった。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
She borrowed the book from him many years ago, it still did not return.
INTO JAPANESE
彼女は何年も前に彼から本を借りていましたが、それはまだ戻っていませんでした。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
She was borrowed books from his many years ago, but it has not yet come.
INTO JAPANESE
彼女は彼の何年も前から借りた本だったが、それはまだ来ていません。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
She had borrowed from his many years ago, but it has not yet come.
INTO JAPANESE
彼女は彼の何年も前から借りていたが、それはまだ来ていません。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
She had borrowed from his many years ago, but it has not yet come.
Well done, yes, well done!