YOU SAID:
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
INTO JAPANESE
私は夏の日にあなたを比較しましょうか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Or let me compare your on the day of the summer?
INTO JAPANESE
または私は夏の日にあなたを比較してみましょうか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Or let me compare your on the day of the summer?
That didn't even make that much sense in English.