YOU SAID:
riding shotgun with my hair undone in the front seat of his car
INTO JAPANESE
彼の車の前部座席で私の髪を元に戻してショットガンに乗っている
BACK INTO ENGLISH
In the front seat of his car is riding a shotgun with my hair back
INTO JAPANESE
彼の車の前部座席には、私の髪の毛を後ろにしてショットガンに乗っています
BACK INTO ENGLISH
In the front seat of his car, riding a shotgun with my hair back
INTO JAPANESE
彼の車の前部座席で、私の髪を後ろにしてショットガンに乗って
BACK INTO ENGLISH
In the front seat of his car, riding a shotgun with my hair back
Come on, you can do better than that.