YOU SAID:
Resurfaces, just the top of his head and eyes visible over the top of the water, watching Akaashi.
INTO JAPANESE
頭のてっぺんと目だけが水の上に現れ、赤葦を見つめている。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Only the top of his head and eyes appear above the water, staring at Akaashi.
INTO JAPANESE
頭のてっぺんと目だけが水面に出て赤葦を見つめている。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Only the top of his head and eyes were above the water, staring at Akaashi.
INTO JAPANESE
頭のてっぺんと目だけが水面に出て赤葦を見つめていた。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Only the top of his head and eyes were above the water, staring at Akaashi.
That didn't even make that much sense in English.