YOU SAID:
rain falls when people cry, my pet rat has died.
INTO JAPANESE
人々が泣くと雨が降り、私のペットのネズミは死んだ。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When people cried, it rained and my pet rat died.
INTO JAPANESE
人々が泣くと、雨が降り、私のペットのネズミが死んだ。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When people cried, it rained and my pet rat died.
Come on, you can do better than that.