YOU SAID:
Ooh, have you come to tell me you've got a horrible disease and only a week to live?
INTO JAPANESE
ああ、あなたはひどい病気にかかっていて、あと一週間しか生きられないと言いに来たのですか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Oh, you've come to tell me that you're terribly ill and have only a week left to live?
INTO JAPANESE
ああ、あなたはひどい病気で、あと一週間しか生きられないと私に言いに来たのですか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Oh, you've come to tell me that you're terribly ill and have only a week left to live?
That didn't even make that much sense in English.