YOU SAID:
Once we arrived at our new home, my mother took a deep breath and opened the car door.
INTO JAPANESE
私たちが新しい家に着いたら、母は深呼吸して車のドアを開けました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When we arrived at the new home, my mother took a deep breath and opened the car door.
INTO JAPANESE
私たちが新しい家に着いたとき、母は深呼吸をして車のドアを開けました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When we arrived at the new home, my mother took a deep breath and opened the car door.
Come on, you can do better than that.