YOU SAID:
Once I went to a park and there was a very old man and he was eating corn
INTO JAPANESE
私が公園に行ったとき、とても年上の男性がいて、彼はとうもろこしを食べていました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When I went to the park, there was a very older man, and he was eating corn
INTO JAPANESE
私が公園に行った時、とても年上の男性がいました、そして彼はトウモロコシを食べていました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When I went to the park, there was a very older man, and he was eating corn
Come on, you can do better than that.