YOU SAID:
on my way to work I saw a dog and it got hit by a car
INTO JAPANESE
仕事に行く途中、犬を見かけ、車にはねられた
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I saw a dog on my way to work and was hit by a car.
INTO JAPANESE
通勤途中に犬を見かけ、車にはねられました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I saw a dog on my way to work and was hit by a car.
Come on, you can do better than that.