YOU SAID:
my puppy wen to the zoo and danced in a parade
INTO JAPANESE
私の子犬は動物園に行き、パレードで踊りました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
My puppy went to the zoo and danced in the parade
INTO JAPANESE
私の子犬は動物園に行ってパレードで踊りました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
My puppy went to the zoo and danced in the parade
You should move to Japan!