YOU SAID:
my name is David I my sister is Dawn.
INTO JAPANESE
私の名前はデイビッド、妹はドーン。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
My name is David and my sister is Dawn.
INTO JAPANESE
私の名前はデビッド、私の妹はドーンです。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
My name is David and my sister is Dawn.
Come on, you can do better than that.