YOU SAID:
My heart sank into deep sorrow when the news came upon me
INTO JAPANESE
ニュースが私に届いたとき、私の心は深い悲しみに沈みました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When the news arrived at me, my heart sank deeply
INTO JAPANESE
ニュースが届いたとき、私の心は深く沈みました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
My heart sank deeply when the news arrived
INTO JAPANESE
ニュースが届いたとき、私の心は深く沈みました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
My heart sank deeply when the news arrived
Well done, yes, well done!