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My dog likes to sleep in the couch while her eyes get red and close

INTO JAPANESE

私の犬は彼女の目が赤く閉じる間、ソファで眠るのが好きです

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My dog likes to sleep on the sofa while her eyes close red

INTO JAPANESE

私の犬は、彼女の目が赤く閉じている間、ソファで寝るのが好きです

BACK INTO ENGLISH

My dog likes to sleep on the sofa while her eyes are closed red

INTO JAPANESE

私の犬は、彼女の目が赤く閉じている間、ソファで寝るのが好きです

BACK INTO ENGLISH

My dog likes to sleep on the sofa while her eyes are closed red