YOU SAID:
my dad left when i was 5
INTO JAPANESE
私は5歳のとき私の父は残しました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
My father left me when I was 5 years old
INTO JAPANESE
私が5歳の時に私の父は私を残しました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
My father left me when I was 5 years old
Well done, yes, well done!