YOU SAID:
my dad left me when i was ten
INTO JAPANESE
私の父は私が10歳のときに私を残しました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
My father left me when I was ten years old
INTO JAPANESE
私の父は私が10歳の時に私を残しました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
My father left me when I was ten years old
Come on, you can do better than that.