YOU SAID:
Like Arthur's hunting dog, the wind barked, looked down, cried, throbbed, knocked on the window, and begged her to go inside.
INTO JAPANESE
アーサーの狩猟犬のように、風は吠え、見下ろし、泣き、ズキズキし、窓をノックし、彼女に中に入るように懇願した。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Like Arthur's hunting dog, the wind barked, looked down, cried, throbbed, knocked on the window, and begged her to go inside.
INTO JAPANESE
アーサーの狩猟犬のように、風は吠え、見下ろし、泣き、ズキズキし、窓をノックし、彼女に中に入るように懇願した。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Like Arthur's hunting dog, the wind barked, looked down, cried, throbbed, knocked on the window, and begged her to go inside.
Come on, you can do better than that.