YOU SAID:
Like a thief in the night, she took from me my sight.
INTO JAPANESE
夜の盗人のよう彼女は私から目を取った。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Like a thief in the night she took from my eyes.
INTO JAPANESE
夜の泥棒のような彼女は私の目から取った。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Like a thief in the night she was taken from my eyes.
INTO JAPANESE
夜の泥棒のような彼女は私の目から取られました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Like a thief in the night she was taken from my eyes.
That didn't even make that much sense in English.