YOU SAID:
Legolas and Gimli advanced on the orcs, raising their weapons with a harrowing war cry.
INTO JAPANESE
LegolasとGimliはオークの上を進み、悲惨な戦争の叫びで彼らの武器を上げました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Legolas and Gimli went up on the orcs and raised their weapons in a disastrous war cry.
INTO JAPANESE
LegolasとGimliはオークを上がって悲惨な戦争の叫びの中で彼らの武器を上げました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Legolas and Gimli went up the orcs and raised their weapons in a cry of disastrous war.
INTO JAPANESE
LegolasとGimliはオークを上がって悲惨な戦争の叫びの中で彼らの武器を上げました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Legolas and Gimli went up the orcs and raised their weapons in a cry of disastrous war.
Come on, you can do better than that.