YOU SAID:
Lauren and Siobhan went to the shops and bought lollies and milk for midnight snacks later that night
INTO JAPANESE
ローレンとシオバンは店に行き、その夜遅くに深夜のおやつのためにキャンディーとミルクを買いました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Lauren and Sioban went to the store and bought candy and milk for a late-night snack late that night
INTO JAPANESE
ローレンとシオバンは店に行き、その夜遅くに深夜のおやつにキャンディとミルクを買いました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Lauren and Sioban went to the store and bought candy and milk for a late-night snack late that night
That didn't even make that much sense in English.