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Last paragraph sounds like an ad ๐ You should try to get them to sponsor your trips!
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ๆๅพใฎๆฎต่ฝใฏๅบๅใฟใใใงใใญ ๐ ๅฝผใใซใใชใใฎๆ ่กใฎในใใณใตใผใซใชใฃใฆใใใใใใซๅชๅใในใใงใ!
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Your last paragraph reads like an advertisement ๐ You should try and get them to sponsor your trip!
INTO JAPANESE
ๆๅพใฎๆฎต่ฝใฏๅบๅใฟใใใงใใญ ๐ ๅฝผใใซใใชใใฎๆ ่กใฎในใใณใตใผใซใชใฃใฆใใใใใใซๅชๅใในใใงใ!
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Your last paragraph reads like an advertisement ๐ You should try and get them to sponsor your trip!
Come on, you can do better than that.