YOU SAID:
Jess shoved the pad and pencils under his mattress and lay down flat, his heart thumping against the quilt. His mother was at the door. "You milk yet?"
INTO JAPANESE
Jessはパッドと鉛筆をマットレスの下に押し込み、平らに寝かせました。彼の心はキルトにぶつかります。彼の母親は戸口にいた。 「あなたはまだ牛乳ですか?」
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Jess pushed the pad and pencil under the mattress and laid it flat. His mind hits the quilt. His mother was at the door. "Are you still milk?"
INTO JAPANESE
Jessはパッドと鉛筆をマットレスの下に押して平らに置きました。彼の心はキルトを打ちます。彼の母親は戸口にいた。 「あなたはまだ牛乳ですか?」
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Jess pushed the pad and pencil under the mattress and lay it flat. His mind hits the quilt. His mother was at the door. "Are you still milk?"
INTO JAPANESE
Jessはパッドと鉛筆をマットレスの下に押して平らに置きました。彼の心はキルトを打ちます。彼の母親は戸口にいた。 「あなたはまだ牛乳ですか?」
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Jess pushed the pad and pencil under the mattress and lay it flat. His mind hits the quilt. His mother was at the door. "Are you still milk?"
Come on, you can do better than that.