YOU SAID:
Jenny reached out a trembling hand, careful not to startle the cat, and gently stroked its back.
INTO JAPANESE
ジェニーは猫を驚かせないように注意しながら震える手を差し出し、そっと背中を撫でた。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Careful not to startle the cat, Jenny reached out a trembling hand and gently stroked the cat's back.
INTO JAPANESE
猫を驚かせないように注意しながら、ジェニーは震える手を伸ばして猫の背中をそっと撫でました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Careful not to startle the cat, Jenny reached out with a shaking hand and gently stroked the cat's back.
INTO JAPANESE
猫を驚かせないように注意しながら、ジェニーは震える手で手を伸ばし、猫の背中をそっと撫でました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Careful not to startle the cat, Jenny reached out with a shaking hand and gently stroked the cat's back.
That didn't even make that much sense in English.