YOU SAID:
James, while John had “had”, had had “had had.”
INTO JAPANESE
ジェームズはジョンが「持っていた」のに対し、「持っていた」のでした。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
James was "held" while John was "held".
INTO JAPANESE
ジョンが「握られた」間、ジェームズは「握られた」。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
James was "held" while John was "held".
Come on, you can do better than that.