YOU SAID:
jack and jill went up the hill to fetch a pale of water
INTO JAPANESE
ジャックとジルは丘にのぼって、水の薄い上昇しました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Jack and Jill went up on a hill, the water has risen.
INTO JAPANESE
ジャックとジルは丘に上って、水が上昇しています。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Jack and Jill went up on a hill, the water is rising.
INTO JAPANESE
ジャックとジルは丘に上って、水が上昇します。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Jack and Jill went up on a hill, the water is rising.
That didn't even make that much sense in English.