YOU SAID:
Jack and Jill ran up the hill to fetch a pail of water. Jack fell down and broke his crown and Jill came tumbling after.
INTO JAPANESE
ジャックとジルは、水のバケツを取得する丘を駆け上がった。ジャックが倒れたし、彼の王冠を破ったし、ジルは後に転落しました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Jack and Jill ran up the Hill to get a bucket of water. Jack fell down and broke his Crown and Jill came tumbling after..
You should move to Japan!