YOU SAID:

its lovely in the evening time but every time i close my my eyes the sunshine gets a little dimmer

INTO JAPANESE

夕方は素敵ですが、目を閉じるたびに日差しが少し薄暗くなります

BACK INTO ENGLISH

It's nice in the evening, but the sun gets a little dim each time you close your eyes

INTO JAPANESE

夕方はいいですが、目を閉じるたびに太陽が少し暗くなります

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Evening is nice, but the sun gets a little darker each time you close your eyes

INTO JAPANESE

夕方はいいですが、目を閉じるたびに太陽が少し暗くなります

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Evening is nice, but the sun gets a little darker each time you close your eyes