YOU SAID:

It feels to me as if one of those foul flying riders was about, up in the blackness where he can't be seen.

INTO JAPANESE

まるで私に暗闇のなかで最大、だったそれらのファウル飛んでいるライダーの一人彼が見られることはできません。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Like me up in darkness, was the rider flying foul of them found him alone can not.

INTO JAPANESE

私を暗闇の中のようなだっただけで彼を発見したそれらのライダーの飛行ファウルすることはできません。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I like the darkness was just in not flying foul of those riders have found him to be.