YOU SAID:
In the marvelous month of may, when all the birds were singing then did i reveal to her my yearning and longing
INTO JAPANESE
5月の素晴らしい月に、すべての鳥が歌っていたとき、私は彼女に私の憧れと憧れを明らかにしましたか
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When all the birds were singing in a wonderful moon in May, did I reveal her my yearning and longing?
INTO JAPANESE
5月にすべての鳥が素晴らしい月に歌っていたとき、私は彼女の私の憧れと憧れを明らかにしましたか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When all the birds were singing in a wonderful moon in May, did I reveal her my yearning and longing?
Come on, you can do better than that.