YOU SAID:

if there was ever a party would you invite me? my dad might say no but my older brother would be down

INTO JAPANESE

もしパーティーがあったら私を招待してくれる？父はノーと言うかもしれないが、兄は落ち込むだろう

BACK INTO ENGLISH

If you have a party, will you invite me? My father may say no, but my brother will be depressed.

INTO JAPANESE

パーティーがあるなら私を招待してくれませんか？父はノーと言うかもしれないが、兄は落ち込むだろう。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

If you have a party, could you invite me? My father may say no, but my brother will be depressed.

INTO JAPANESE

パーティーがあるなら招待してもらえますか？父はノーと言うかもしれないが、兄は落ち込むだろう。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

If there is a party, can I invite you? My father may say no, but my brother will be depressed.

INTO JAPANESE

パーティーがあるなら招待してもいいですか？父はノーと言うかもしれないが、兄は落ち込むだろう。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

If there is a party, can I invite you? My father may say no, but my brother will be depressed.