YOU SAID:
If I were to die the world would not remember me for very long.
INTO JAPANESE
もし私が死んだら、世界は私を長い間覚えていないでしょう。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
If I die, the world will not remember me for a long time.
INTO JAPANESE
もし私が死んだら、世界は長い間私のことを覚えていないでしょう。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
If I die, the world will not remember me for a long time.
That didn't even make that much sense in English.