YOU SAID:
If I wanted to go to the store with my family that I own, would you perhaps wan't to come with me on this adventure for us?
INTO JAPANESE
私が所有している家族と一緒に店に行きたいと思ったら、この冒険に一緒に来てくれないでしょうか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
If you want to go to the store with my family, why not come with me on this adventure?
INTO JAPANESE
家族と一緒に店に行きたいのなら、この冒険に一緒に来てみませんか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
If you want to go to the store with your family, why not come with us on this adventure?
INTO JAPANESE
家族と一緒に店に行きたいなら、この冒険に一緒に来てみませんか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
If you want to go to the store with your family, why not come with us on this adventure?
Come on, you can do better than that.