YOU SAID:
I wrote a comic and I want you to review it
INTO JAPANESE
私は漫画を書いて、私はあなたがそれを見直してほしい
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I write a cartoon and I hope you review it
INTO JAPANESE
私は漫画を書くと私はあなたがそれを見直すことを願っています
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I write a cartoon and I hope you will review it
INTO JAPANESE
私は漫画を書くと私はあなたがそれを見直すことを願っています
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I write a cartoon and I hope you will review it
That didn't even make that much sense in English.