YOU SAID:
I went to work and did my job and then went home and watched a concert and then slept
INTO JAPANESE
仕事に行って仕事をした後、家に帰ってコンサートを見て寝ました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
After going to work and working, I went home to see a concert and went to bed
INTO JAPANESE
仕事に行って仕事をした後、家に帰ってコンサートを見に行き、寝ました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
After going to work and working, I went home to see a concert and went to bed
Come on, you can do better than that.