YOU SAID:
i went to the barber today and got a new haircut.
INTO JAPANESE
今日は床屋に行って、新しい散髪をしました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Today I went to the barber and got a new haircut.
INTO JAPANESE
今日、私は床屋に行き、新しい散髪をしました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Today I went to the barber and got a new haircut.
Come on, you can do better than that.