YOU SAID:
i went to the bar and drank some wine and got drunk
INTO JAPANESE
私はバーに行ってワインを飲み、酔いました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I went to the bar, drank wine and got drunk
INTO JAPANESE
私はバーに行き、ワインを飲み、酔いました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I went to the bar, drank wine and got drunk
Come on, you can do better than that.