YOU SAID:
i want to go to the carnival tonight, will you take me?
INTO JAPANESE
今夜はカーニバルに行きたいのですが、連れて行ってくれませんか。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I would like to go to the carnival tonight, but will you take me there?
INTO JAPANESE
私は今夜カーニバルに行きたいのですが、あなたは私をそこに連れて行きますか。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I want to go to the carnival tonight, will you take me there?
INTO JAPANESE
私は今夜カーニバルに行きたいのですが、あなたは私をそこへ連れて行きますか。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I want to go to the carnival tonight, will you take me there?
That didn't even make that much sense in English.